Who wrote the mission description for the Good News side mission? Whoever left that complete car crash of mis-punctuation in the game should take a moment to reflect on their language skills. It is worse than most social media arguments I’ve seen. 
Could you share a screenshot?
I think he means this.
"It has been about four months since the Cataclysm. Anyone who has made it this long has stopped looking back.
The Tylöveden Forest is a comparatively safer place for survivors: the region shows clear signs of small nomad groups that seem to be moving between safe places whenever FNIX’s machines gets too close: rationed supply stashes in houses, lightly barricaded supermarkets, bike racks, traps for machines, well organized living spaces.
But the war is just beginning: FNIX still controls most of Östertörn, and has established a massive base somewhere in the forest. A group of survivors near Lerberget have planned to blow it up, but they have now stopped responding. There is a letter from an acquaintance of yours in Lerberget that contains instructions.
Before FNIX’s neural network spreads further right in the heart of the survivors’ safest area, only you can raze the FNIX base to the ground, and build the first Resistance Home Base instead; it will serve both as defense for a long-range radio station, and a place to call home for humans.
If once-isolated survivor groups were able to get in contact with each other, arrange supply runs and share skills, life wouldn’t only be about sabotaging and fleeing anymore."
I don’t see any problems with it? 
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A couple unnecessary colons maybe, if you are an English major. It’s silly to even mention it.
There are colons instead of full stops. Commas before both ands and buts. Sentences that should be divided, with full stop and capital letter, into two sentences to help readability. Ironically no comma where there should definitely be one. This is not English Major but basic English grammar and generally good practice. Readability matters. I have straightened it out for you below. You’re welcome. 
It has been about four months since the Cataclysm. Anyone who has made it this long has stopped looking back.
The Tylöveden Forest is a comparatively safer place for survivors. The region shows clear signs of small nomad groups that seem to be moving between safe places whenever FNIX’s machines gets too close. There’s rationed supply stashes in houses, lightly barricaded supermarkets, bike racks, traps for machines and well organized living spaces.
But the war is just beginning. FNIX still controls most of Östertörn and has established a massive base somewhere in the forest. A group of survivors near Lerberget have planned to blow it up but they have now stopped responding. There is a letter from an acquaintance of yours in Lerberget that contains instructions.
Before FNIX’s neural network spreads further, right in the heart of the survivors’ safest area, only you can raze the FNIX base to the ground and build the first Resistance Home Base instead. It will serve both as defense for a long-range radio station and a place to call home for humans.
If once-isolated survivor groups were able to get in contact with each other, arrange supply runs and share skills, life wouldn’t only be about sabotaging and fleeing anymore.